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c.l.a.s
Posts : 49
Join date : 2010-09-22
Location : East Moline, Illinois (US)
| | Subject: (Lightning Strikes) (11/19/10) Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:39 pm | |
| Cody "The Lightning" Smith: Explodes from the entrance. Followed by a Kratos "God Of War"
Cody "The Lightning" Smith: We are here today to show u the destruction War & Lightning can bring
Cody "The Lightning" Smith: Runs down the ramp picks ur a chair, slides in to the ring and just starts bashing the wooden ring posts down to twigs cutting the ropes, Tearing off the ring top
Kratos "God Of War": Grabs a 6 gallon tankk of gas o' line and sprays all along te ring side
Cody "The Lightning" Smith: Exits the ring with a lighter and throws it
Boom!!! Flames from the ring almost reacing the audience die out quickly only to leave a half burnt down ring
Cody "The Lightning" Smith: Nothing compared to the damage we will bring to Corbin "The Hystaric" Smith and his gang
The crowd goes wild after Corbins name is said, Cody and Kratos leave the arena. The Show Goes Off Air
Last edited by c.l.a.s on Wed Nov 10, 2010 12:37 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
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"The Hysteric"
Posts : 222
Join date : 2010-09-20
Age : 30
Location : East Moline, IL (US)
| | Subject: yo Mon Nov 08, 2010 9:46 am | |
| u need to fix your spelling, and u stole my catching on fire idea lol. | |
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"The Hysteric"
Posts : 222
Join date : 2010-09-20
Age : 30
Location : East Moline, IL (US)
| | Subject: Yo yo Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:37 pm | |
| Cody "The Lightning" Smith Explodes from the entrance, followed by Avenged Sevenfold
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Cody "The Lightning" Smith: We are here today to show u the destruction Vengeance & Lightning can bring to the table.
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Cody "The Lightning" Smith Runs down the ramp, picks up a steel chair, slides into the ring, and starts bashing
the wooden ring posts down, splinters go in all directions. Avenged Sevenfold slides into the ring with bolt cutters and
snaps the turnbuckles, dropping the ropes. Cody & Avenged Sevenfold then together Tear off the ring cover.
Avenged Sevenfold Grabs a 3 gallon tank of gasoline and dumps it all around at ring side
Cody "The Lightning" Smith Exits the ring, pulls out a lighter and throws it down as he jumps back.
!!!Boom!!!
Flames from the ringside shoot up almost reaching the audience. They die out quickly leaving a half burnt audience barrier.
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Cody "The Lightning" Smith: This demonstration is Nothing compared to the damage we will bring to Corbin "The Hysteric" Smith and his gang.
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The crowd goes wild at the sound of The Hysterics name. Cody and Avenged Sevenfold grin as they leave the arena. The Show Goes to commercial.
Last edited by "The Hysteric" on Wed Nov 17, 2010 9:29 am; edited 1 time in total | |
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"The Hysteric"
Posts : 222
Join date : 2010-09-20
Age : 30
Location : East Moline, IL (US)
| | Subject: yo yo yo Mon Nov 08, 2010 1:38 pm | |
| there was too much wrong with that lol. so i just redid it,
and in case u hadnt seen MINE, VOLT's, & ARCTIC's conversation about names,
when u talk your name isnt in bold ok? | |
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"The Hysteric"
Posts : 222
Join date : 2010-09-20
Age : 30
Location : East Moline, IL (US)
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Arctic Terror
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Posts : 320
Join date : 2010-08-27
Age : 31
Location : Riverside IL
| | Subject: Re: (Lightning Strikes) (11/19/10) Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:39 am | |
| How would we continue the show if you jst blew up the ring? | |
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"The Hysteric"
Posts : 222
Join date : 2010-09-20
Age : 30
Location : East Moline, IL (US)
| | Subject: hahaa Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:29 am | |
| ha thats why i edited it, anyone feel free to fix it further. | |
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Arctic Terror
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Join date : 2010-08-27
Age : 31
Location : Riverside IL
| | Subject: Re: (Lightning Strikes) (11/19/10) Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:59 pm | |
| Edit it one more time Kratos is in another fed now. | |
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"The Hysteric"
Posts : 222
Join date : 2010-09-20
Age : 30
Location : East Moline, IL (US)
| | Subject: yo Wed Nov 17, 2010 9:30 am | |
| i fixed it and changed the whole
LEAVING A HALF BURNT RING part.
it just scathed the audience barrier. not even sure what the point of this RP is actually, but just make sure this comes before
i burn Avenged Sevenfold.
Idk if hell be out of the stable, im still looking for a replacement. | |
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c.l.a.s
Posts : 49
Join date : 2010-09-22
Location : East Moline, Illinois (US)
| | Subject: Yeah Fri Nov 19, 2010 6:46 pm | |
| Yeah theres not much faces can do except take a beating i mean destroying a ring was as close as i got to intimidating | |
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