Shannon Moore
Posts : 9 Join date : 2010-09-29
| Subject: Shannon's preparing 4 his match Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:27 pm | |
| The camera opens, showing a locker room with black walls and a red light that turns the entire room in a mystic gleam. After some moments, you can figure out someone, who's walking circles while talkin to himself. . Shannon Moore: Alright... last week didn't end as I planned, but eh, need to forget about that. I need to prove myself now. It's getting serious. Time for warm-ups is over. It's the real business now. Well, even when I don't know this... Sonjay. I'm sure, he knows some things baout me. But that doesn't matter now. I need to win this match. I need to get my virst victory in here... Else, it's not gonna look very good. . As he passes the camera, you can see his painted face and his tattoed body. As he leaves the view of the camera, the camera pans on the ground and slowly fades blank. | |
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c.l.a.s
Posts : 49 Join date : 2010-09-22 Location : East Moline, Illinois (US)
| Subject: Good, but Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:01 pm | |
| Good , a little to short i like your enthusiasm try to do a little better with your spelling and rps ill re formatt it for you tell me what u think | |
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c.l.a.s
Posts : 49 Join date : 2010-09-22 Location : East Moline, Illinois (US)
| Subject: A Redo Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:09 pm | |
| The camera pans from the last match, showing a backstage locker room with black walls and a red light that turns the entire room in a mystic gleam. After some moments, you can figure out someones in the room, the camera focuses on the man who's walking in circles while talkin to himself. . Shannon Moore: Alright... last week didn't end as I planned, but eh, need to forget about that. I need to prove myself now. It's getting serious. Time for warm-ups is over. It's the real business now. Well, even when I don't know this... Sonjay. I'm sure, he knows some things about me. But that doesn't matter now. I need to win this match. I need to get my first victory in here, cause with my first victory people will start to recognize the real athlete i am,... Or else, it's not gonna look very good. . As he passes the camera, you can see his painted face and his and his very well done tattoed body. As he leaves the view of the camera, the camera pans to the sold out A.W.A arena.
( you can change the end i just didnt like how it slowly fades black) damn computer wont get the last of that paragraph or ur name
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Arctic Terror Admin
Posts : 320 Join date : 2010-08-27 Age : 31 Location : Riverside IL
| Subject: Re: Shannon's preparing 4 his match Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:13 pm | |
| I guess I'll do it right then
The camera pans from the last match, showing a backstage locker room with black walls and a red light that turns the entire room in a mystic gleam. After some moments, you can figure out someones in the room, the camera focuses on the man who's walking in circles while talkin to himself. . Shannon Moore: Alright... last week didn't end as I planned, but eh, need to forget about that. I need to prove myself now. It's getting serious. Time for warm-ups is over. It's the real business now. Well, even when I don't know this... Sonjay. I'm sure, he knows some things about me. But that doesn't matter now. I need to win this match. I need to get my first victory in here, cause with my first victory people will start to recognize the real athlete i am,... Or else, it's not gonna look very good. . As he passes the camera, you can see his painted face and his and his very well done tattoed body. As he leaves the view of the camera, the camera pans to the sold out A.W.A arena. | |
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